tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12339846.post3711726050282252176..comments2023-10-14T07:38:12.854-04:00Comments on Jo Janoski's Blog: Train TracksJo Janoskihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09206890846490911655noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12339846.post-89955037297942568622009-04-17T20:09:00.000-04:002009-04-17T20:09:00.000-04:00It's a very lonely sound, isn't it, or maybe just ...It's a very lonely sound, isn't it, or maybe just a worldly one, people going places...it's definitely a sound with personality. Am I rambling again?Jo Janoskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09206890846490911655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12339846.post-29221266102005307252009-04-17T17:40:00.000-04:002009-04-17T17:40:00.000-04:00My grandmother lived near a train track. At night ...My grandmother lived near a train track. At night laying is bed I would love to hear it noise as it passed byterrymcdermotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02441410379154602089noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12339846.post-6031323142681469762009-04-12T18:19:00.000-04:002009-04-12T18:19:00.000-04:00I'm convinced that watching a train baring down on...I'm convinced that watching a train baring down on you would be more painful than impact. <BR/>Jo, I like the repetition of <BR/>"Dusty roads intruded with train track snakes"Danhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13986014894382899336noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12339846.post-58285316986026047832009-04-11T09:05:00.000-04:002009-04-11T09:05:00.000-04:00Actually, the poem was inspired by a local story o...Actually, the poem was inspired by a local story on the news where a guy was hit by a train, no suicide implied in the reality.Jo Janoskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09206890846490911655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12339846.post-43186619976645804352009-04-10T14:39:00.000-04:002009-04-10T14:39:00.000-04:00Hi Jo,I couldn't imagine suicide on the train trac...Hi Jo,<BR/><BR/>I couldn't imagine suicide on the train tracks. The thought of it hurting so bad even for a moment. I liked your line:<BR/>"on saddened men with souls inclined to break."<BR/><BR/>It hurts me to think of all the saddness in their minds!Jo A. T.B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06925256842521954260noreply@blogger.com