Wednesday, June 10, 2009

Raking Leaves

Two small poems for a workshop challenge where the prompt was "raking leaves."



tumultuous
excitable mob
flying, coerced frenzy
raked leaves
revolt

Copyright 2009 JO Janoski




Raking
forlorn leaf piles
whooshing in sad day songs
once verdant dreams
stacked high.


Copyright 2009 JO Janoski

3 comments:

  1. These reminicent of Fall images! I liked dreams stacked high!

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  2. I agree that is why I hire someone to do it. LOL!

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  3. Terry, lol. I think I'll go get the yellow pages and find me someone to do the job.

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