Saturday, May 15, 2010

Hovering


Little towns
with wide streets smiling
graced by tall trees hovering
over little secrets, tiny lies
whooshing through tall tree branches
like birds on the fly
out of hell.

Copyright 2010 JO Janoski

3 comments:

  1. Whoa! I love this. It goes from "Hey, that looks like the pretty town in "It's a Wonderful Life" to... well, hell...
    "tall trees hovering over little secrets"... "Lies.... like birds..." mmmm

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  2. Don't you love surprise endings?

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  3. Yes towns have many secrets, if only we knew them all! Inquiring minds want to know!! Good one!!

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