Monday, September 08, 2008

Poppies



Poppies
red-dressed damsels
fluttering petal fans
swaying sweet summer melodies
at dawn.

Copyright 2008 JO Janoski


6 comments:

  1. I love poppies Jo, you captured their beauty well in your cinquain!

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  2. Why is it I cannot read the word "poppies" without hearing the wicked witch say the word
    poppies...
    poppies...
    sleep...
    gee, now I'm sleepy

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  3. Jo, thank you. I think poppies are so beautiful. I really tried to express it with this one.

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  4. one of my favorites---plant them everywhere

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  5. I can feel the red... beautifully written.

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