Two Men Looking at the Moon by Caspar David FriedrichBefore Storms
Before storms
a man stands alone
hiding deep in musings black
waiting for thunderous roars before
stepping back with eyes cast down.
Trouble knows his name
and speaks it.
Copyright 2008 JO Janoski
A haunting photo, with the trees,
ReplyDeleteand wonderful verse to accompany.
What is the form, similar to cinquain, or cinquain variation!
Jo, The form is a septet. The following syllables per line:
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awe
ReplyDeleteyou wrote a poem about me
how sweet
thanks
oh
not about me?
Ozy,
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this is a really good one
ReplyDeleteHi, Jo... I can really relate to this one.
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ReplyDeleteTrouble has indeed become familiar with my name
ReplyDeleteMy eyes, though, cast not toward the ground