Wednesday, July 23, 2008

Life Maximus











Wave by Katsushika Hokusai

Surf exuberant
dancing pie-in-the-sky dreams
jockeying water
knowing the unknowable
spying beyond today's shores.

Copyright 2008 JO Janoski

(Tanka, no rhyme necessary.
Syllables per line: 5,7,5,7,7)
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2 comments:

  1. Scot7:18 PM

    pie in the sky dreams

    love this!

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  2. ozymandiaz10:08 AM

    wonderful write
    hey, I used to have a tanka toy when i was a kid
    oh, wait
    that was tonka toy

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