Sunday, December 30, 2007

Christmas Commotion

Christmas Commotion
A Parallelismus Membrorum

With feathery limbs
rugged bark trees
tickle calm sky
before the rumbling
lined with lace snowflakes
as storm clouds invade
at Christmas
on a turbulent winter day
As winter winds accost
indoors gently we celebrate.

Copyright 2007 JO Janoski

5 comments:

  1. this is lovely jo...

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  2. As Parallelismus Membroria go, this is certainly one of them. Trouble is, they don't go far enough... More, dammit!

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  3. Hi Jo, I love your images in this one, great job.

    Bob

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  4. Jo this paints a wonderful picture of contrast; safe inside from the oncoming storm.

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