Iron limbs? Jo, get off that merry-go-round! Sorry, couldn't help myself. This is beautiful, really... and I like it that every word matters, it's not self-indulgent or wordy. Nice work...
I have a book with Divinci's drawings, One I was thinking about writing a poem about a few years ago, but never did. Thanks for sharing.
great poem Jo
ever ride bareback thu a maelstrom? Not as fun as it sounds. OK, I had a saddle but it still was pretty scary.but then again I had no golden conquest...fun read
You get so much out of a line drawing ... this is as powerful as the taunt lines of DiVinci, nicely done, as usual - a fan
Iron limbs? Jo, get off that merry-go-round!
ReplyDeleteSorry, couldn't help myself. This is beautiful, really... and I like it that every word matters, it's not self-indulgent or wordy. Nice work...
I have a book with Divinci's drawings, One I was thinking about writing a poem about a few years ago, but never did. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeletegreat poem Jo
ReplyDeleteever ride bareback thu a maelstrom? Not as fun as it sounds. OK, I had a saddle but it still was pretty scary.
ReplyDeletebut then again I had no golden conquest...
fun read
You get so much out of a line drawing ... this is as powerful as the taunt lines of DiVinci, nicely done, as usual - a fan
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