Pleading Petulant red tears Prayer lightning, turbulent skies Petals exuberant Poised to obscure a rose's face Passing by with quiet secrets Possessed.
Coming over from Blogsboro Poetry Club, Jo; love the tone and message of this pleasant but powerful alliteration. The picture of the rose is beautiful, too..:)
Rose Meditative by Salvador Dali
you so please with the Ps
ReplyDeleteAlliterative to the max... very pleasing, as well.
ReplyDeleteI agree with panama--perfectly pleasing
ReplyDeleteNice poem and thanks for sharing the pic of the rose.
ReplyDeleteComing over from Blogsboro Poetry Club, Jo; love the tone and message of this pleasant but powerful alliteration. The picture of the rose is beautiful, too..:)
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