Tuesday, May 20, 2008

Pleading

Rose Meditative by Salvador Dali


Pleading
Petulant red tears
Prayer lightning, turbulent skies
Petals exuberant
Poised to obscure a rose's face
Passing by with quiet secrets
Possessed.

Copyright 2008 JO Janoski




5 comments:

  1. you so please with the Ps

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  2. Alliterative to the max... very pleasing, as well.

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  3. I agree with panama--perfectly pleasing

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  4. Nice poem and thanks for sharing the pic of the rose.

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  5. Coming over from Blogsboro Poetry Club, Jo; love the tone and message of this pleasant but powerful alliteration. The picture of the rose is beautiful, too..:)

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