has a kind of *snap* to it
love it. we've got a local guy who walks the downtown streets yelling, "shoe (long pause) shine!" it's very musical.
Who doesn't love the shoeshine man? I agree with scot... lots of snap in this one. Well done!
nice odedon't recall ever having my shoes shinedfor that matter, I only recall seeing one and that was in an airportsmall southern towns where all the rednecks walk around barefoot...not much need for shoe shines I reckon
hey this great. can picture a shoe shine man in a thirties movie.
Good going!! shoe shine man. :-)
check out your sleek new look... just came from scot's.. i love this,, and his,, you a two are on a roll.....
This is very well done....has the energy.
Love it! There's something about a good shoe shine... You should check this out, it's funny and it relates to your poem there.http://youtube.com/watch?v=uPY-sGRIL30
Hahahahaha! Casey, you're right! I just checked out the video.