Thursday, August 07, 2008

Kicking Up

Image credit: Rick Mobbs - my four sisters


Kicking Up

Storms gather
with tides nipping shore
but sisters know how to swim
dancing in rushing waves together
kicking up inspiration
that way sisters do
holding hands.


Copyright 2008 JO Janoski






7 comments:

  1. You're so good at these forms Jo.
    Your words always full of wonderful images! My blog been down 2 days now, hoping they fix soon!

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  2. great form, fits the image well

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  3. Nice job, Jo... soft as the photo, yet with all the strength of accomplishment.

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  4. Anonymous7:24 PM

    I really like the shape of this poem, looks like the sea in motion. May the sisters bring more inspiration to you.

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  5. Anonymous8:21 PM

    Sisters are always there for each other...

    bonded forever

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  6. Anonymous5:23 PM

    that is beautiful... having four sisters i love this picture.....the way sisters do holding hands is a lovely sentiment i can hold onto...

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  7. Anonymous2:09 AM

    this is such a beautiful poem - really lovely!

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