Thursday, January 03, 2008

I'm da Man!



I'm da Man!


Smoky heart, bubbly mind, alone again.
That's okay...there's no pain.
Iconoclastic revolution!
Welcome to my resolution.
Cigar sparks anger, black hat tower.
I'm da man. I have power!
Cigar sparks anger, black hat tower.
Welcome to my resolution.
Iconoclastic revolution!
That's okay...there's no pain.
Smoky heart, bubbly mind, alone again.


Copyright 2008 JO Janoski

6 comments:

  1. I had but one thought after viewing the image of a man who thinks he knows that he is right and the entire world wrong: I'd like to see that man back at the bar forty years later.

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  2. Jo, I like it. This man a certain arrogance about him & I think you capture that very well! I'm still working on mine, hope to have it up soon.

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  3. You da poet... Strong arrogant image captured with your use of words. thanks.

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  4. Yea, he don't seem too worried about being alone, resigned as it were to being lonely at the top

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  5. Poor bastard... where is Dashiel Hammett when he needs him most? Nice mood-setter, Jo...

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  6. janetleigh1:06 AM

    Another excellent read, Jo! You worked this one so well. I don't know what you call this form (repeating the same lines in the 2nd half in reverse order..?), but you did that picture justice. Excellent! (I love your wit and playfulness, too..:)

    janetleigh
    Poetmeister...on the road to Parnassus

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