Sunday, January 13, 2008

My Love

A Cinquain for the Word Catalyst Workshop.


My Love

My love
rippling water,
pulsing in vibrant red,
issuing waves of affection
to you.


Copyright 2008 JO Janoski

9 comments:

  1. Wow, the cascading words reflect a beautiful image. thanks

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  2. Very nice Jo. So few words can say so much!

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  3. Hi Jo, I like this one and I like this form too, thanks.

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  4. a very pretty,, almost valentine-sy feel to it... very nice....

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  5. Very pretty, Jo... cudos!

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  6. This is lovely and flows effortlessly. I agree with Paisley, it would make a wonderful Valentine tribute.

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  7. janetleigh1:36 PM

    Your poem is just in time for Valentine's Day! Lovely sentiment, especially "issuing waves of affection to you." I can see it in my mind's eye - waves of love cascading over a loved one. Lucky guy..:)


    Poetmeister...on the road to Parnassus

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  8. For all my ability to put my thoughts into words, and I believe I have some talent in that direction, I doubt I could so successively put my true emotions into so few words. Well done

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