Wow, the cascading words reflect a beautiful image. thanks
Very nice Jo. So few words can say so much!
Hi Jo, I like this one and I like this form too, thanks.
a very pretty,, almost valentine-sy feel to it... very nice....
Very pretty, Jo... cudos!
This is lovely and flows effortlessly. I agree with Paisley, it would make a wonderful Valentine tribute.
Your poem is just in time for Valentine's Day! Lovely sentiment, especially "issuing waves of affection to you." I can see it in my mind's eye - waves of love cascading over a loved one. Lucky guy..:)Poetmeister...on the road to Parnassus
For all my ability to put my thoughts into words, and I believe I have some talent in that direction, I doubt I could so successively put my true emotions into so few words. Well done